|Reviews for Desolation|
| Remalna Marguerite 3/28/01 . chapter 1
This is gorgeous...it made me feel serene.
| Akira Bane 10/19/00 . chapter 1
Very good , I've never read poems quite like these . . . . .
| Shine 10/14/00 . chapter 1
Again, as with the other I'm not familiar with Hawaiian folklore so the overall meaning is lost on me, but the language you use is very vivid and well-utilised. Great job, again.