Oh my god you're actually a good poet.

...the previous sentence is not as insulting as I just realized it sounds. Usually about 75% of the stuff found on isn't very good, but you are so like a young female ee cummings spinning around in circles! Hurrah! C'est tres bien! You are now a favorite author, young lady!

What if a dawn of a doom of a dream bites this universe in two?

bloody brilliant,

i say, bloody brilliant

kai