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| RealmLost 2002-10-26 ch 11, | abuseBarbo! songs! GOOD! hehehe -Million Times Over- I like this one.. kind of sad, but still good.. I especially like the chorus part.. "Life works in circles..".. that part is really cool.. hehe -Broken- sad, but still good.. the tales of love lost are always the saddest, but they always make for great writing material ;) -Other Side- you go from love lost to love unreachable.. so strange.. anyway, I really like this one.. he's just too far away to reach :'( -Goodbye, Life- this also seems like something I would have written.. but the only word I really need to say for this one is "whoa"... -Live a Little Dream of Life- I could especially relate to this one... parents trying to hold you back from what you want, trying to blind you from the truth, constantly acting as if they know more than you just because they're OLDER... GAH! lol.. sorry, vent-age here.. I liked it though.. subject matter and wording and all fit together quite well :-> -Slave to Choice- this one was a lil odd, but still good.. freeing slaves and such.. hehe.. I have a poem kind of like that too, but it's more of a joyous kind of "we're free" sort of thing, rather than a "leave now before I change my mind" sort of thing.. hehe.. did that make any sense at all? -A Single Kiss- hehehe AW! I bet you had a certain Sofa on your mind when you wrote that one =P.. hehe.. so sweet! -Can You Hear Me?- this one was my favourite... I really like the chorus, and when I was reading I got a tune for it stuck in my head.. hehe... it was really good though.. loves it! -Future Lost, Past Gained- I didn't really get that one, but oh well.. strangeness -Disconnected- this one was a little strange as well, but I still got it... I really liked the last verse thing.. "Stand up on the hill of Angels... just give in"... those 4 lines sent a chill down my back, hehe.. goodness, gracious, Barbo! you can write! lols =P -Utopia- not many people can write a good fantasy-ish sort of song, but you did! of course you did, you can do ANYTHING! hehe.. I liked dis one too =D Well, that's all for my song reading for the time being! They were so good, Adiez! Long review O_o... Love n' hugs! ~*HollieS*~ |
| That Firefly Chick 2002-08-23 ch 11, | abuseWell, these were fun. ^_^; Very nicely written... |
| brittany 2002-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei really like this song! you sound like a good writer, email me or something. I am attempting to post some of my songs except i'm a computer klutz! ha. |
| Zennith 2002-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. thats all i can say. this song is really, really good, along with the others you have written |
| Tigger Girl 2002-08-18 ch 11, | abusethose were some of the most amazing lyrics I have ever read! Great, great job. |