Update soon kill the evil editing monster! Un. SO I hope you update soon and...11yrs!?

AH IT BURNS> CLiffhanger...I hate those things FYI!

NOw this part intrigues me... Cause it reminds me of mine demo I try to stay away from male characters who don't have nice unique characteristics. I only have a couple guys with no interesting qualities really. But he's a plot bunny. I go with young guys >.

SO many characters! AH daijoubou. I can dig it! It reminds me of Halo strangely.

67+ chapters long?Cause I'd love to review on every chapter! AH just what I've been looking for! Scifi Romance! My top fave now.AH mahou you no isshun ni aeru no ka?!

i was somewhat confused at first..but when i figured it out,i liked it.keep it up!!^_^

You have me intrigued...please update soon because I really want to know what's going on!!

this is really good! i love stories set in the future! keep updating

You've got a great start on this. It's a pity - it looks like you've lost interest in it... I want to know what happens next!

where's the rest?? please write more!

Hey, this is awesome so far! Can't wait to read more...
I got a question for you, though. How did you get the tabs to work? I can't figure out how to do bold, italics, tabs, etc whenever I try to post. Thanx, and keep writing!
~*~Angelic~*~

I like it so far! UPDATE SOON! :):):):):)

You've got to write more! This is a great, intiguing beginning. Please write more, it's a fabulous story right now. Well, keep up the good work!! Although I do think that maybe a little more character development might be helpful, and it might be helpful to describe a bit more about what's going on, but then, descriptions can come later, when you write more, right? Nudge, nudge, hint hint! ^~ Well keep it up!

I think you have a really great start to your story and I hope that you continue it in the near future. It has great potential.
JasmineFlower