Okay I said in an earlier review that less was more well in this case it's not it's more is well... more, wait what I mean is *scratches head* ohh I know yeah length doesn't matter because it's great reading oyur work no matter how long or short it is! And yay this is about my fave subject reality! You manage to convey the feelings of lonliness and distance excellently there's soo much emotion in your writing... hm yep you can definitly tell your writing from personal experience here *sigh* life it is a ** no dobut about it... and reality well that's like the erm.. super ** of all things! Fab poem ^_^

hi
wow this is a great one

thats the way i feel
lovly work
hope u rite more
-Elly