 the insane floo pot 2004-04-22 . chapter 1WOW again with the shortness... I love how you can use so little words but convey so much in them... I know what people mean now when they say less is more... erm kinda anyways! I can totally relate to this poem I'm always day dreaming about becoming someone else and leaving myself! And I'm not sure if you've done it deliberatly or not but kudos on the whole spacing out thing... it gives the poem an sense of detachment and distance... which totally helps to relfect the meaning of the poem... this poem's soo amazing ^_^ |