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| paputsza 2007-12-20 ch 10,  | abuse-.- i must bribe you. if you update this story i'll put you on my favourite authors list O.O please would you wuff me. |
| Lady E 2007-10-27 ch 10, | abuseI am smitten. Head over heels. This is truly a rare gem to find on this site. The writing, the storytelling, is just breathtaking. The way you open each scene, the way you weave each moment together, the characterization. Absolutely nothing of FP cliches can be found here. This would be a stunning contribution to slash fiction, but even if you don't complete this revision of it, I would still love to read it. You'll be getting an e-mail from me soon. :) Best of luck with university. |
| nashia 2007-05-07 ch 10, anon. | abuseThat was so good and you are so bad for leaving it like that.I've just finished reading the entire thing and it was beautiful.The story flowed so brilliantly and the description was so good ,i could almost feel the heat of the pampas and the calm of oasis.however the change from village to city could have been fleshed out more but it was still good.i really hope you update because i am seriously interested in reading the rest of this on its 2007 four years since you updated .i want to read the ending before i die.lol |
| Black Guns 2006-12-24 ch 10, | abuseThis is an amazing story. It's well written, it's interesting and it's got that lovely angsty undertone that I adore reading in stories. I can't imagine why you never finished it, but it's a great shame. I hope inspiration hits you somtime when you least expect it. Keep writing ~ BG |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 10, | abuseI like I like I like! Really really good story. You're a wonderful writer!POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 7, | abuse*converts from glomping Carlos to strangling him* Stupid male! I hope Fabrizio leaves him and takes the damn house with him!POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 4, | abuse*is still glomping Carlos* WAI! SO CUTE! You're a wonderful writer although I'm sure I've said that enough times... ^_^'POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 3, | abuse*grins* THAT WAS SO CUTE! ...I'm so eloquent today... ^_^'POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 2, | abuse*glomps Carlos* I love how you characterized him in the church. The way it was written was so...*glomps again for lack of better expression* Anyways, he reminds me of Draco Malfoy in a way, only not really. You know?POOFtoodlesTJword up.Wonderful write! |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG! *goes ninja on the dad's arse* He's a bugger! I like it I like it I like it! Brilliantly written so far. Thank you for the lovely email btw! I was actually planning on reading this eventually, I've just been swamped in homework and writing a fanfiction that I've sworn to update once a week @_@ *dies* Anyways, lovely chapter!POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Silver Daratraz 2005-06-24 ch 10, | abusewhat else is going to happen? |
| Walter Dash 2005-04-28 ch 10, | abuseI will pray that you rise from the dead and update. |
| AidianRusso 2005-03-10 ch 10, | abusehEY YOU LIKE REALLY GOTA continue this please?I love it! |
| HiryuuGekijou 2005-03-10 ch 10, | abuseYay! I like this story. Although I must say that I was surprised when you killed off Carlos. Oh well... And again, your writing is impeccable. I am excited for the next chapter. |
| Shoujo Kitsune 2004-09-02 ch 10, | abuseYummy...It's great so far and I can't wait to read the rest! I'm a bit sad that Carlos and Fabrizio had such an abrupt end, but Luigi sounds like an interesting character and I'm betting we will hear quite a bit more about him in the future. |