   Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 6Update or finish onegai |
| Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 5 More More More |
| Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 4 well i love the chapter |
| Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 3 How rude. |
| Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 2 Sweet |
| Sweet123 2007-11-05 . chapter 1 cute |
 Ryu 2006-08-05 . chapter 6 Hey! wht happend to the rest of the story?I cudnt stop reading it!please please continue this story! =(( n i wud hv reviwed earlier but i always do it after i hv read a story =) |
 cloverluck11 2005-07-18 . chapter 6this is a very interesting story...update soon k? :D |
| a fan 2004-12-19 . chapter 6 omg! u are the BEST writer! i cant believe i overlooked this story at first! it is so good! i luv ur ideas and writing so much! please please please update a bunch on this story and all of ur others! i cant believe no one else has been reviewing this!! the guys sound so hot! (lol!) and Iris is so cool! you're characters are really strong, and i just luv it all! u should finish this story and all of ur others quickly, get them all published, write it in ur profile, and i will run out of school to buy them! keep it up!! :) |
 Wolf-Demon-Lord 2004-07-19 . chapter 5hmm its nice i like your style still not anime material but good i like it btw i like your style its originial i am an anime freak like you but in your profile you ramble but i like your style and i reemphisize i like no love your style your good but need an editor may i offer my services contact me at luvmuffin20022003@yahoo.com and ill be your editor or beta reader |
 karayuquex 2004-04-27 . chapter 5Uwah! I love this! I heard that you're going to update soon... I think... so I'm really really really happy if you did update any of your stories! |
 pixy-dizzy 2003-11-26 . chapter 5gah! evil! how could you end it like that? pls update! begging you! |
 Chaotic Child 2003-03-19 . chapter 5Wow! This is awesome! Is that the guy who promised to help her? please update soon! this is great! |
 Andiavas 2003-02-16 . chapter 5woah O_o that bid was like. O_O WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH @_@;
hehe, I bet that guy is the guy from the first chapter.yeah ^_^
please please continue this story!! arrgh. I hate cliff hangers!! O_O! |
| ed_the_female 2003-02-07 . chapter 5 aaaaaaaaahhh! she got sold, didn't think that would happen.... yeah w/e soooo who bought her was it some stranger or was it her friend from her younger years she never forgot about? hmmmmmm....? don't leave me hangin hear with an important question!!!! @_@ lots of gil.................... you could buy so much like an assasin to get rid of mister Juuse there... * rubs hands together grinning evilly, hunched over* fuunnn.... ^_^ |
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