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Reviews For: Just Like The Weather, Part One: Breaking - Reviews: Page 1 of 8

Islandgyal2004
2006-09-02
ch 32,
abuseLoved the first part
Knightley
2006-07-14
ch 3,
abusethis is definitely worth putting in my favorite stories list
Records Made For Elephants
2006-01-02
ch 29,
abuse'She shrugged. “Like I’ve always thought. The past is your past.” She smiled again. “Your past doesn’t have to be your future, you know? I’ve never understood how people can judge people by their past.”

“Me neither,” I replied. “Never made sense to me. If someone’s changed… it’s like hating someone who just doesn’t exist anymore.”

“Exactly,” she replied...'

That explains everything[[with past that is.]] I love how you explain things so nicely and clearly. That's why I like your story. Because you use words more than actions. And with the words you explain emotions and it's difficult sometimes, but I love it.

Your analogies and explanations make me realize some things within my own life.Thank you. And I hope you finish up the second part of the story! I read it and there were only two chapters XPJust some motivation! lol

Thanks.

Eileen-Ann
deli-lise
2005-01-01
ch 32,
abuseGreat story. it really made me think. Keep it up.
peppermint-kiss
2004-02-04
ch 1,
abusenice storyy!
yoda's-vegetables
2004-02-01
ch 32,
abuseyou lay it on pretty thick in chapter 25...
other than that, stuff like this gets published every day.
think...a cover...an insanely priced hardbound copy with your name on it...your other other new book, How to Make Millions Over the Internet...!
yoda's-vegetables
2004-02-01
ch 20,
abusedammit why did you have to go and tell that you're a girl? I was having so much more fun imagining you as just a person.
kitten (lazzzzyyyy...)
2003-08-30
ch 32, anon.
abusedamn it, one of your cliffhangers! argh!

but i must say, they may be a bit fucked up and all, but i somehow missed these characters, mack and dag. lol. here's to me and my hibernation.

but yeah - bravo, daddy, bravvo! *clap*clap* the tension gets me. yep. and the weird form of what, pseudo-happy ending?

agh you and your cliffhangers still.

(but i can't demand for an update, could i?) =(
Just Wolf
2003-08-16
ch 32,
abuseshite, can you really actually end something with a cliffhanger like that? poor cordelia...
i liked the conversation, i liked the image it gave me, warm sunlight, warm sheets, warm bodies, safety and forever. and knives of doubt and fear cuttignthrough it all... it was an amazing conclusion. i can't wait for the sequel
Just Wolf
2003-08-10
ch 31,
abusegreat chapter, s'taking very interesting turns. mack is such a great character. she feels completly real. anyway, yay, thanks for finnaly updating, and that was brilliant. more, soon?!
Believable Facade
2003-07-09
ch 30,
abusegah! Dagmar kissed Mac! I give up trying to figure all of this out...but it is very good and I know you said you don't post here for your ego, but it should be said that you have an amazing talent for capturing what is...real in people. I hope you don't stop writing becuase I love reading what you produce.
Just Wolf
2003-07-06
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE this story but will you PLEASE update?
find-nowhere
2003-06-13
ch 30,
abuseUpdate. If you don't then you're evil and I'll hate you.
Hrm...I'll suck up now. You're a wonderful writer, and you've left me hanging rather efficiently. You also managed to keep my attention for 30 chapters only to do so to me, which is very cruel.
Dartxni
2003-05-23
ch 30,
abuseNo! Aww, how did I know that would happen. Well I knew it had to happen eventually but dang!

Dagmar has instantly become my favorite character of all time.I sereiously dont know how you will fix this. But please do. I hope the ending is not that they are both destroyed.
daneorange
2003-05-22
ch 30,
abusejesus christ. how could you be so cruel as to leave it *there*?!?!

but then again, this is so you.

and, by the powers vested upon me (if any) as kitten, i so demand the next chap. *grin*
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