Wow sad... I don't understand cutter sthough... I just don't get them.. I'm suicidal myself, but I'd never actually hurt myself.. Ouch the pain....

Oh this is soo sad. I like the way you put it together.

that was a sad story, but i liked the poem.

The poem is good....but the third stanza breaks teh rhytm of the poem. Hehe...it's weird that when you are near your death...you want to be alive....gj w/ the poem!

That's very tragic, sorry. The poem however I liked even though it was a real story.