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| Richard 2005-05-31 ch 35, anon. | abuseAll I can say is... wow!cor blimey this is like, this is good enough for TV its actually that good, shame that can't happen. It was an excellent read thanx :D Another fic I like is the zoids one with bit and his bro at fanfiction.net that was an excellent read aswell :D blimey 25 reviews? should be way more like over 200 :|, oh well hope to read more of your stuff in the future :) |
| depressed-and-bored 2005-05-21 ch 33,  | abusewee... |
| depressed-and-bored 2005-05-18 ch 35, | abuseTHIS ROCKED!! I LOVED IT!! All your stories rock! |
| waterdragonrai 2005-04-21 ch 35, | abuseAwsome story! Love the ending! |
| dream311 2005-02-24 ch 35, anon. | abuseyou really should have a lot more reviews for this it was such a great story and really well written i looked at the number and couldnt believe that it was so small i really really liked it though and i think im gonna go read some of your other stories ill try to review those to |
| Ai Yuukan 2004-07-27 ch 35, anon. | abusethat was... beautiful. the story was so well-plotted... so well-formed... and the characters were unbelievable. the characters were so strong and deep... this has exceeded manga (if i ever thought such a thing was possible). this is one of the best stories i have ever read and believe me, i'm a picky reader. You're the best writer i've seen out there. You're just... amazing. |
| Jade Elf 2004-07-21 ch 35, | abuseThis was an incredable stroy. I cant believe how few reviews you had, it is so good. I loved the ending, with kitai and Tori finnaly, at the end of the war declaring their love for each other. Jade Elf |
| Katsiebee 2004-05-19 ch 35, | abuseAh, I loved this story. And now it's over. Must read your other stories...even if I should be working on my stupid report... |
| Cactus Flower 2004-04-29 ch 1, | abusei love your description. i could really picture the characters and the demons. yeah...i'm not very good at reviewing... -_-' |
| SulliMike23 2004-04-16 ch 35, | abuseWow...I just finished reading through the whole story and I must say I am impressed as always, Kitai. You named your main character after your screen name, you put in a teriffic love story, the drama (gotta love the drama) was excellent, the villian was so evil it sent chills down my spine, I don't know what to list that was bad. This story is just amazing! A few things reminded me of other animes as well, like the previews. The previews were similar to that of Blue Gender but they were still good. Despite all of the similarities, if this were turned from a story to an anime it would be on the top of my charts. On a scale of one to ten with ten being the best, I give this story a solid 10. I gave it stars with five being the best, I'd give it five. And if I were Ebert and Roepert, I'd give it two thumbs WAY, way up. You get my point, this story is the BEST! ^_^ I'm glad I managed to read this. |
| SulliMike23 2004-04-15 ch 10, | abuseNot a bad story Kitai. Though I can't help but notice that where Kaya says "Dodge this" to the demon with her gun, the situation reminds me of Trinity saying that from "The Matrix". Did you get the idea for that from the matrix? |
| lighthouse 2004-03-01 ch 35, | abuseThis story is magnificent. I love it. You are a great author. |
| EvarWing 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseOkay, there's already ALOT of chapters, so I'll have to catch up. This story is AWESOME, your writing sytle is SO cool, I'll be keeping an eye out for anything else you've written, there's just so much, hehe. ^.^ |
| Vagrance 2004-01-19 ch 28, | abuseVery good storyline so far, solid. Try not to sound too impersonal or it feels like a newspaper article. Generally, it's a good story |
| Purple Uranium 2003-10-02 ch 4, | abuseLove your story. Are you going to update it any time soon? |