Oh god why do you make me love ALL of your stories? it is so not fair :D but i really do love this one. a lot. yeah. :D

No it's over!! :'<

i loved this story it the best ever

Good story. I really don't like Trinity. Karma is a B*. Good for Jacob. I'm glad that Daryn and her worked stuff out.

You are amazing omgosh haha I mean 2 wicked awesome mentions of things from Washington? xD Jones Soda and MxPx are the ** xD.

Lol, ok so I have to agree with you parents who name their child brick are on crack.I just had to tell you this story =) My friend Matt's last name is House and his little brother's name is Brick. Why kind of parent does that to their child? haha.

Finally together forever! Aww..So sweet. Loved it. Thank you!

Great story, keep up the good work.

I think the story's got a good plot and the characters seem decent but you need to revise your writing. You have the tendency to rewrite things. For example, Daryn's piercings... you mentioned at least three times how surprised Hannah was he had them. So either she's got amnesia, or you need to fix that. Something else that bugged me a bit was how you spelled out every little thing for the reader. I'm not saying to be super vague, but you should leave some things for the reader to figure it out. Hannah was a pretty cool character but you tended to make her really over-dramatic at some times and really calm during other times. It's alright if you know how to balance them, but you seemed to just throw them together. I hope I didn't offend you or anything, but those are just some things I noticed that I figured I should tell you. After all, all writers want improvement, right? :)

The chapter moved pretty fast, but it was still interesting. I can't wait to read more :)

My my, you're story is indeed intresting, but please, all this disclaimer-thing in the end of every chapter is getting annoying. As you were a two year old baby claiming on to her favorite toy. Just say the story is yours, you don't have to make a different story about it everytime...

i luved this story, it was lovely, some parts were very emotional tho and i didnt really like the best friend character but the main male and femal...along with jacob..i luved it..
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i love this chapter..so intriguing..

Fantastic story! I'm glad that I got to see Trinity's true side and I'm also glad that Jacob got over her and found someone else.

Keep writing!

Really good story! I love Hannah and I can't help but feel animosity towards Trinity... perhaps she's not a bad girl but she seems a bit inconsiderate towards Hannah, like when she did a makeover on her and never understood that she liked herself the way she were. And this deal with Daryn, that she just so easily accepted him and going out with him just like that ** me off.

Anyway, I will see in the following chapters what will happen. I only wanted to compliment you on your fantastic story!

So Ijust started reading this and I really liked this but I really hate that fact that you made her seem so mad and all this other stuff but then you didn;t even have her go a whole chapter mad at him I think that is dumb as **.