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| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abusei love this chapter..so intriguing.. |
| ZsaZsa 2008-02-03 ch 22, anon. | abuseFantastic story! I'm glad that I got to see Trinity's true side and I'm also glad that Jacob got over her and found someone else. Keep writing! |
| ZsaZsa 2008-02-03 ch 9, anon. | abuseReally good story! I love Hannah and I can't help but feel animosity towards Trinity... perhaps she's not a bad girl but she seems a bit inconsiderate towards Hannah, like when she did a makeover on her and never understood that she liked herself the way she were. And this deal with Daryn, that she just so easily accepted him and going out with him just like that ** me off. Anyway, I will see in the following chapters what will happen. I only wanted to compliment you on your fantastic story! |
| Morbidly Sarcastic92 2008-01-02 ch 10, | abuseSo Ijust started reading this and I really liked this but I really hate that fact that you made her seem so mad and all this other stuff but then you didn;t even have her go a whole chapter mad at him I think that is dumb as **. |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-08-22 ch 22, | abusedamn straight its your story! good too |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-08-21 ch 6, | abusewow. great story, hope it finishes as good as it started! |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 22, | abusewow. not friends with Trinity? i wouldnt either :( |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 17, | abusethats what i thought last chapter. i was thinking TRINITY'S PREGNANT :O |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 10, | abusei hate daryn :( right now... |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 9, | abuseI hate Daryn right now. |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 7, | abusewho's kyle? did you mean Jacob? |
| atreyu love 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abusehaha. |
| 77-LiLiAnA-77 2007-07-04 ch 22, | abuseYay, I finished! What can I say, I usually dislike stories with too much fighting and all that stuff, and even though Hannah and daryn went through a lot of those, I still loved this, you are awesome!! |
| 77-LiLiAnA-77 2007-07-04 ch 3, | abuse"and then the next thing I knew, she was scared she was pregnant. After awhile, that just starts to get…annoying." OMG, I have a friend, thankfully not my best, who is always in that situation, really, it annoys the heck outta me! Anyway, I'm 100% hooked and it's only the 3° chapter... |
| unidentified elephant crap 2007-05-16 ch 22, | abuseThe best so far. :]] FAVORITES! |