i like this! keep writing and update this please, i want to know what happens next!

interesting, but update it! I must have more!

Go Tera show him that guys are not dominate!! Hello, it's me the pestamistic author that can't spell anything. Your right that you're pretty good at writing, I enjoyed readying Tera and it cleared up the part about vampires not haveing breath. Cause I need to use that in my story later...yeah Ja Ne!

That was a little strange. Nice to hear from Matt and Tera again but I feel it needs some more explination. I kind of like how she is losing her compassion that would have made her human. Keep writing,
Future Pulizter Prize winner,
R.C. Polk