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Neophrite 2003-07-05 . chapter 17
i'm really sorry. i wish you'd been motivated. because i feel no closure. i mean, yeah there's an epilogue, but can you really answer all the questions you've left in one epilogue? who destroyed his hands? what really happened in the accident? does he ever regain his memories? shall i go on? maybe i just need to go back and read it again to understand better. but i still feel so... chopped from the rythm you'd had before. sorry.
girlsbleedglitter 2003-06-29 . chapter 17
I predicted the cutting. This was such a great story. I wish you hadn't lost such interest in it or whatever, 'cause the ending.. I don't know, was sort of a dud? Heh. *shrugs* But it was great all the same! =))

-x- Jenna
DragonsEclipse 2003-06-24 . chapter 17
I like the ending too. However, it's sad that it's over. Oh well, I have your other stories to read! ^_~

Keep up the excellent work!
Purple Colored Auora Petals 2003-06-23 . chapter 17
Eh...well, you warned us. Ah well, time to read another chapter of something else.
Purple Colored Auora Petals 2003-06-23 . chapter 16
Forgive me, I've been away for some time and it seems that I've missed tons. Well, even though you claimed this chapter to be **, it was good **.

I liked it somewhat.
Bottledinsideme 2003-06-22 . chapter 17
Yes, its nice to have an ending for a story. It wasn't crappy...kinda meaningful if u look at it...the story didn't really got me hooked but I liked the meaning of the questions u raised...
Lemonhead754 2003-06-17 . chapter 16
yay...he's getting his memory back!! okay now i REALLY have to go to bed
DragonsEclipse 2003-06-16 . chapter 16
It's good that Tarin has finally remembered a lot of things. At least he'll know how people are. But, also, because now he remembers his brother, it'll be hard for him to deal with Greg's death. Before, when he didn't rememeber, it didn't really bother him as much. AnYwAy, I await the last chapter or two. Keep up the good work! ^_^
Bottledinsideme 2003-06-16 . chapter 16
Ahh, don't feel crappy about the story. To tell the truth, I wasn't really into the story in the beginning. Actually, it was ok after a while. Finally, he remembered something. Thank god. Don't put so much stress over this chapter -- I give props up for not letting your readers down and finnishing the story.
DragonsEclipse 2003-06-03 . chapter 15
This story is excellent! I can't wait to find out what happens next. It's great that Tarin finally remembered something. His parents have been acting a bit cold around him, especially his father. However, it can be understandable, in a way, because they really don't know what to say to him or how to act. Tarin is so different now. I'm glad that he has Zane and Steph. Keep it up! I await your next chapter, eagerly!! ^__^
DragonsEclipse 2003-06-02 . chapter 10
I'm back. I could stay away for long. lol ^_~ Greg was his brother? That really sucks that Greg is dead. I wonder if that's why the father doesn't like him. Perhaps he blames Tarin for what happened to Greg. Well, I'll find out tomorrow. Keep it up! ^_^
DragonsEclipse 2003-06-02 . chapter 6
This is really good! I'm going to come back and read more later. Right now, I need to dedicate my time to my studies. I have exams tomorrow. 0.o Keep writing! ^_^
Neophrite 2003-05-04 . chapter 15
I don't know, but for some reason I have this really uneasy feeling about their trip. Call me crazy. I'm still wondering where they're going, too, but that's a little obvious. Hope you update soon! :)
u-know-who formerly known as sak 2003-04-18 . chapter 15
this isnt my favourite story, but this chapter is giving me some suspiscons.. or whatever. coz , his best friend and his girlfriend?? what is Tarin doing, the fool! i bet they are gonna *accidently* do something and he is gonna feel so betrayed huh??
Lemonhead754 2003-04-17 . chapter 15
i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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