I like it. It reminds me a lot of a Billy Joel song the way it tells a story.

I also like how you have created a character that you feel angery twords.
Most people go for the easy way and have someone you feel for.

All in all this is very cool!
The things we find in our closets! :) :)

It's interesting. I like how we've gotten to know the main character, and how it tells of her kids and household going to 'heck' while she feeds her obsession. Honestly, I don't like it as much as I should mostly because I have some deep subconscious contempt of the main character. I do like the writing, though.