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Psychogizmo 2007-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI really like how you didn't mention your age in this. It can help the reader feel closer to the character...or, well, you. It shows that this sort of thing could happen to anyone.
BeautifulLiar 2005-05-16 ch 1,	abuseHey, I've been reading a lot of your stuff lately. This one's my favorite, and it made me cry (at school!). Keep writing!
Mistress of Evil 2003-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI loved ur story. I can totally relate. I'm battling right now. It IS hard...very, very hard. It's good 2 no I'm not alone.
Flying Colors 2003-07-19 ch 1, anon.	abusestares Thank you for the advice. And I'm glad that (if this is a true story) you stopped starving yourself after awhile.
silver 2003-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abusecould this story be anymore true? I have an eating disorder. anorexia. It's so confusing. I hate it and love it all at once. I feel discusting knowing that I think bones are beautiful. (What's wrong w/ me?!?) and discusting when I WANT to be bones. It's scary. Really scary.
Lina Inverse 2003-05-26 ch 1,	abuseWell-written. It really got to me, because I have a close friend who heavily considered becoming anorexic.
Kawarinaku Kinsei 2003-03-10 ch 1,	abuse^^;; I truly envy you. Unfortunatly I have an eating disorder, but am also very unhealthy besides it, have variosu different illnesses, never excersise, can't move properly, get sick often, etc. Very touching, I must say, and thank you for such a great thought track.
Witch-Green-Eyes 2003-02-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is a beautiful and descriptive story. Sometimes I feel like losing weight, but I am healthy. If I ever feel like starving myself, this biography will be a great reminder to eat right and be content with my body.
Somebody 2003-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm assuming that in your school they never showed you those videos on eating disorders. God. Those are scary enough to make you eat evrything in a 5 mile radius just to make sure you don't end up like that. The effects of eating disorders are more long term than you probably think. It destroys your bones. On one of the videos there was a woman around the age of fifty. She couldn't even walk by herself, her bones were so weak. So if you want to ruin your life before it reaches the mid-way point, keep it up! You're doing a freaking wonderful job! Also, you may not realize how incredibly disgusting you look when you do that to yourself. You may see someone pretty, but other people see someone who's about as lovely as a skeleton. So turn back now and you may not ruin your life. Maybe. But if you continue on with it all you're going to do is end up killing yourself maybe even before you're thirty. It's your choice. Hope you choose the better of the two.
Kuri Anami 2003-02-17 ch 1,	abuseThat was..powerful. And no, I don't understand what you are/were going through, but I have taken FULL NOTICE of your point of view on this. I hope you recover fully. -Kuri Anami
anonymous 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI've been able to see and feel that bone in my wrist since I was born. It's not scary, it's just different. I've always been able to wrap my hands around my wrist, it's not bad. Just don't let it get the better of you.
Galea 2003-02-17 ch 1,	abuseOh.wow. I don't know what to say,I am speechless this has touched me in such a way.Amazing. You NEED to send this in to get it published somewhere.Like in Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul or something. This needs to get out.Though I have never starved myself, I can see what you are getting at and people need to realize that they can't do this to themselves.It is just not right. When I read this, I was not sure what to expect.But it is amazing and I felt something I have never felt before. Bye bye! ¤Galea¤
FallingUp 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI know how u feel, I'm dealing with the same thing and no amount of words from anyone else is going to change you, I know that much, it comes from inside I guess, no matter how much of cliche that is, the more I learn about myself and the disease is that, I hope through writing you can find peace
D'Artagnan 2003-02-17 ch 1,	abuseWow. I was reading this and thinking "I'm just like this". I only weigh around 105 pounds and I always think I'm fat. Especially my legs. But my ribs stick out. My stepmother likes to tell me I look like hell with my sunken eyes and **. It's pretty depressing. Anyway, this was amazingly written.
Backwards Into A Wall Of Fi... 2003-02-17 ch 1,	abuseHey gurl. Um i'd just like to say, i liked your biography. I'd also like to say, that i am exactly the same way. i mean i'm definitly not healthy but theres not much i can do.Anyway, I'm writing a biography myself and i'm only finished the first chapter but Compared to yours it pretty much sucks. I am a poetry writer, not a biography writer, but i am attempting to do it anyway. Anyway, i really like your writing style. Like me, you write from the heart and not many people can do that anymore. Keep writing :)

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