Wow!
Free writing... I hate having to do that, but you pulled it off very very well! Congrats!

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Cool. Very interesting. I like a lot.
Katie xx

That is fantastic! I can't believe how briliant your poetry is! Have been working my way through all your poems, and they are all fab. This is no exception.
Keep up the great work!
Now I'll go onto the next one!
Luv katie x

Ah. Reminds me of Madrid. This poem could have taken place there. Nicely done

wonderful imagery. reminded me of tchaikovsky. no, not really, sorry, I meant Wagner. Lovely, lovely.