i love this story! i want to no what happens next!

merely expressing my wishes for this story to be revived.

oi update will u? ive been waiting 4 3 months? sry to b rude but... i wanna kno what happens...

I really, really want you to update this...I love the thing between the twins...too bad my twin and I aren't like that...

I love the ay you write, too bad you decided to put a halt to this...

Too tired to log in **yawn**

Really good, I love the plot O.O

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ohh! I like quite a bit! I love how your work flows, the words all fit together so well, and when you do use cliffhangers you do so without giving the slightest hint as to what might happen next! I love this!

ah! there's no more story to read!
*sigh*
please update soon!!
i love this story. i love the twins (probably becasue i am one too. lol =). i love the plot...i love everything. it's very well writen, except for a few (very few) minor errors here and there (spelling or words missing -such as "of" "for"...) but given the lenght of your chapters, this is really great. too bad there is no "click here to put this story in your favorites" button right in the review becasue i would have done that, but am too lazy and tired to login and do it there. but i WILL do it later. i promise.
again, thanks for giving us the opportunity to have a great time reading your fics!! (wow, that souned a little weird. oh well, but it was true! =) *grins and waves*

aww, kindle's so cute!! i'm so glad that i stopped to read, i almost didn't! that would have been a shame! this story is so well formed and beautiful, i can't wait to see more. of course, i'll have to read your other stuff too, but i think i need to go pass out now! later,

Colie

Hey, this story seems really good so far! The characters are interesting, and the plot is cool. Can't wait to see where it goes.

I've only got one critique, and it probably won't help much since you're already so far into the story, but whatever. The dialogue in this is rather formal. It sounds a little awkward, because that's not really the way people talk. At first I thought maybe it was just a personality quirk of the twins, but then realized that all of the characters talk like, well, an essay. Maybe if you just relaxed it a bit...dialogue is hard to get right. Anyways, its certainly not enough that I would even consider not continuing reading. Just thought I'd point it out.

Okay, off to the next chapter for me!

Excellent! I went to your website for this, and I really liked it! I can't wait for more!

Its cool i cant read the next chapter right now but i will so be comming back for more

:squeals and claps hands: That was wonderful, you write really great angst/action, great way to start the morning. Soory I couldn't get to this sooner, but life gets busy, veeryy busy.
The policewoman was amusing to a point, and I really liked the desription of the immortals homeworld, and what happened there. Ireally liked that scene, I loved the chapter, but that scene seemed fun. Maybe it's my hyperness talking...
I'm looking forward to seeing more about how the various relationships are going to work out.
Off to see the side story!

You've done a wonderful job, I hope you update quickly! It's a pity it's not in your plans, because I have to say, I like Kindle MUCH better than Nicolai for Rica. Kindle is by far my favorite in this story, and it's impossible to see how Rica couldn't end up with him instead. Nicolai seems like such a worm.

damn! this is good! stupid cliffhanger
>;( hehe ^^ good luck for the next chapt, hopefully it'll come soon ^^
~redredredred