 KrAeMiUaI 2004-05-14 . chapter 11 When would this be updated again? T_T I'm already missing this.. *sniff* *sniff* |
 Ed-the-female 2003-07-29 . chapter 11OH! It's so great! Maku's so cute! * glomps Maku* Eien's such a klutzy guy! and seki * growls menacingly* OHH!! * glares daggers at Seki* Raine, always liked that name, sounds like a nice person, write and post more! |
 midzen 2003-05-04 . chapter 11Ahh! Such a good story! The dream sequence was so sad. I hope that doesn't really happen. I like Eien, even if he's a bit over-protective. I would like to know more about Seki, maybe so I could sympathize with him a bit more. Even if he's stealing Raine from Eien... Oh well...I can't wait to see how the dinner goes! |
 Nirae 2003-02-05 . chapter 11This is soooooo cute! Hehehe.... Poor Eien, Raine still doesn't remember him. And poor Maku. I can't believe I just had written that after all the bad-mouthing he does about humans, but he deserves some sympathy. |
 Romula Linders 2003-01-30 . chapter 11okay this is on my favorites list and has been since I first read it a long time ago. I try and keep up with it often so please update soon! its such a cute lil fic! |
 The SleepWalker 2003-01-20 . chapter 11Not a bad chapter, but I wish you would do something about the grammar. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, I'm just saying that maybe you should get a beta-reader or something. I'd even be willing to volunteer. Even if you don't get a beta-reader, please keep writing, I love this fic. |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 11konichiwa!
I WANT MORE!! YOU MUST CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
*adds story to favorites list*
like the chappie! eien had a bad dream, but maybe it will help him realize that he loves raine...
oh, and is maku now a dog? I thought he was a teddy bear-did it change?
well, ja ne!
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 10konichiwa!
oh! eien is being all noble and sweet and finally saving raine from something that is actually dangerous! however, read my lips-well, I guess I mean writing, but you know what I mean- eien NO DIE! I know that he wont, cause that will ruin the story and would be a pretty crappy ending, but I had to say that. suspense always gets me like that...
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 9konichiwa!
LOL!! LOL, LOL, LOL!!!! that was a RIOT!! and I'm glad that holli will be back! now, what about the taxi guy...
ja ne,
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 8konichiwa!
holli was a great character! but...I like the taxi cab guy better-put him in the story somewhere! he was funny! so was holli, I just cant get the picture of this bald taxi driver with tears in his eyes turning around, saying that he will pursue his dream[what is the dream, by the way?], and then jumping out of the cab leaving his astonished customers as he jumps and joggs off somewhere....
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 7konichiwa!
what would I do is a kawaii bishounen saved my life? good thing I'm not supposed to answer that...
it was nice getting some insight to what raine is feeling. oh, and I agree; colds are evil and must be stopped!
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 6konichiwa!
he saved her from a shopping cart. a shopping cart?! where did that come from?!
another good chappie though! and eien is going to see johnny? this should prove to be VERY interesting...
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 5konichiwa!
uh-oh...sounds like eien was inspired by a soap opera on daytime tv...not a good way to start a relationship, especially since the soap opers featured people who had trouble with the english language and was completely unrealistic...
YEAH! maku pov! maku funny! ^_^ well, I better find out what eien is going to do...
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 4konichiwa!
if seki knows that she says ei-ei in her sleep, then he knew that eien wasnt bad cause eien said "remember me, ei-ei!". *glares and mutters about stupid jealous fiances...*
~Sakura |
 Sakura-Hikaru 2003-01-19 . chapter 3konichiwa!
excuse me while I laugh hysterically...maku a teddy bear?! that is great! I was cracking up the whole time! and I agree, it would be too easy for raine to simply remember ein-and a little boring too...
cant wait to see what happens next!
~Sakura |