This captures the event as perfect as I have ever known... i do wonder, though, are you describing you dying, or another? If it is the latter, why don't you describe how it is to get over that? I'd love to hear your words on the matter.

I appreciate your pleasent review you had given me. I had just put it up and your review has brighten my day! Thank you...I've read a few of your pieces, I like this one the most. I love the opening, it looses you in it's blunder of words.

Good M&M.

nice, so simple so subtle but strong, i get such vivid mental images from this poem

Very beautiful. It's amazing how you can create such strong emotions and images with so few words. Good work and I liked it.

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Thanks for the review.

Aww, nobody reviewed. Iz ok, I'm here for ya!

This was nice, but a bit too abstract to follow for someone as dense as I am.