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| ratatooie 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abuseAll your writing is sickening in a good way. Does that make sense? I doubt it. |
| EvilAngelfish 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you play with punctuation in this story but it seems more like a conceptual piece than a meat-and-potatoes story... maybe that's a weird comment. In any case, this piece takes you to a place far away from where it met you and it's always good to have moving prose. It's quite interesting. |
| WorthWaitingFor 2003-07-27 ch 1, | abuseLove the honesty and descriptiveness. It was excellent but not exactly uplifting which is a good thing. It was more like quasi-excellent since it was good in a not good mood sort of way. I'm going to read some more because I really like your style of writing. Please read my story, Child of Glass or my newest, Feel You Me because both of those are much better than the two you reviewed. Just returning the favor and thanks for reviewing my stories. I like your honest critcism better than anyone's "I loved it, it was great" comments. Which is ironic since that's what I just gave you. |
| Lya S 2003-04-16 ch 1, | abusehey. the title of this one always caught my eye, now i finally got round to reading it. what i can say? some things i didn't understand, but it's amazing, the way u wrote this one. i was honestly stuck to each word. |
| taelwak 2002-08-25 ch 1, | abuseGod that was beatiful..... |