FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| xhianglian 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuse*sighs* its so sweet :( |
| Lin Winter 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I noticed that most of your poems have a deep underlying meaning and that they tend to show a strong negative emotion such as fear, anger, or regret. Not to say that that is bad. I am just stating a point. Good job on the poem. |
| BrittneyAnna 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was baeutful. |
| dupidnavagog 2003-01-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, esp. the 2 twists in the second half. I didn't see those coming. You really captured the conflict felt when someone you love deeply also hurts you deeply. Ironically, it's so easy for the people we love the most to cut up our souls with the smallest of offenses. The first half is better written than the second - maybe as you sort out your feelings more, you'll find more fluid ways to express it. |
| Chavi West-Wind 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abusei like it...best work, no, but i still like it =^.^= |
| Airman2002 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuseWOW. ill be the first to adbit im not big on petry but i like this. Very well done |
| MoshiMoshiQueen 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abuseit was very good! I love the way you wrote it! Great job!! |