this is just beautiful. i have to say i've grown rather attached with it, i've read it so many times. i love the metaphors, especially the 'plastic palm trees' one and 'the city of angels'. i can't point out anything wrong, it's perfect! you've given me inspiration. :)

very beautiful, eloquent, and might i say absolutely touching.

Simple, but stylish and original. Very inspiring. Great work. =)

it was good, my favorite letters were letters:I & V (3 & 5) but all the letters were very very good!

Holy guackie! This is so beautiful. And sad. I'm adding this to favorites. Its inspiring. I'll look at it whenever I need inspiration.

Goodness. I told you before - I /love/ this poem! Much coolness and perfection. It looks even spiffier with the format like that.

Faorties list, yes indeedy.

This is pleasantly bittersweet. Love the title as well, made the poem. Ah, very nice work!