i havent read such a good poem in such a long time! i think its ispirational...kind of makes me want to write a poem myself. wow...im just...speech less. keep writing! your talent is rare. ;)

37 words, 8 sentences, 1 powerful poem. As my teacher always used to say: Kort, maar krachtig.

Yes, yes yes: I love this

'Live with broken morals' ... this is the line I like the most as I think it fits me... at least that's how the family would look at it.

you've got an aptitude for capturing the fundamentals don't ya? :D You also seem to have a strong command of your own talent, its good to see.

a very clear and concise poem, poignant that it came it you in a maths class...

I really, really enjoyed this.

wow...awesome poem! nice choice of words and cool how you used "broken" in every line! i love it! *adds to favorites* good job! keep it up!

I *so* get what you're saying here! Awesome job!

wow, this is great! you really can be proud, everyone should be once in a while :)

thanks for your nice review!

cio,

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Very nice! Short and to the point...I like it! I wish it was longer...Fits my mood perfectly though ;;

So very true at times. This is hard, cold, and nothing but the truth of this world. That's what I like about your work. You seem to have lots of experience. Another to go in my favorites.

so strong, so strong

hey, this rulz girl, at skoll so gtg, but write more soon!

Wow, another great poem! It's short but good.I especially love the last line. I'm waiting for more of your poems...

I like this one. Keep on keepin' on!