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| Lady Psychic 2006-12-20 ch 48,  | abuseThis was a lovely story and had memerable characters. It was really funny at times and quite cute as well. |
| ItalianQT 2006-11-21 ch 48, | abuseYeah!! Morgan was finally cured! and everybody is gonna live happily ever after!! :-) |
| ItalianQT 2006-11-17 ch 8, | abuseI love the reference to "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe! lol |
| Lovers of Eden 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| Green Eyed Pixie 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abusei read this ages ago, but never got round to reviewing and i heart this story a hell of alot. The characters rock so hard. =] |
| Prisoner-11 2006-03-17 ch 48, | abuseWhee! *frowns* Whee!! *sniff* No matter how many times I try, I can't make sparkles! Very nice story, I LOVED it! I actually read it all in one sitting...I think that's 4 hours... |
| eh. 2006-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is fairly interesting and I like Gregory's personality. Agreed, it is rather funny in some instances, but I want to ask one thing: the choppy sentences and "He"'s at the beginning were on purpose, right? Otherwise I'd prefer you try to smoothen the sentences out a bit more, but if it was done on purpose to depict Zak as a more simple-thinking person, that's great. Just make it more clear. |
| lokita 4 lyfe 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to tell u my friend read me a few chapters of this while we were on the phone and I was laughing so hard...yeah... CHINGE SU MADRE BUSH!PEACE OUTSIDE!~Bluwater a.k.a. Blu |
| Sora Kohaku 2005-10-18 ch 5, | abuse*dies from the sweetness* I wish I could continue reading it right now, but I have to do homework.*sighs* *in bliss* |
| Kaorii 2005-08-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseThe whole idea of Hi-Ho being carved into her head is just awesome. Damn. Disney needs you for a writer. |
| Kaorii 2005-08-12 ch 8, anon. | abuseI died laughing at the reference from the raven. That was awesome. |
| frisca-magister 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseYAY! this story rocks...you've probably heard it before, but it does! I was really depressed, and I read this again, and I was happy! I'm happy for you fellow shounen-ai story writer! *pats on back* ^-^ |
| Starlite nightfall:MOO MOO 2005-03-24 ch 48, | abuseOMG, I did n ot realize that this story was written so long ago..I was so caught up ...It's GREAT! It's funny, and dramtaic, and serious with sadness here and there. I loved it! One of my favorite stories. I'm just gonna cruise your website and live journal and see if I can join your community thing. PLz let me...I'm starlite_neko there. ^_^ This is sucj a beautiful story, and I loved how everything fell into place and how Daemon was maried all randomly. I could go on forever, but that would probably bore you. so...THIS IS GREAT!! pARt II..AHAHAHAHA! |
| KereiKitsune 2005-01-29 ch 21, | abuselmao I love those things. This is possibly the funniest story I've ever read in my life ^_^! |
| KereiKitsune 2005-01-29 ch 15, | abuseI Love these chapters so much!! |