Umm...it's usurper not 'userper'

I have a suggestion for a title:
"Aurora: The Lost Heirs"
Eh?
Anyway, good story so far. You got talent, mate.

this story is your best! I love it. it actually almost sounds like one of my stories that's not up yet in the beginning. but i love the way you have set out this story.

Nice intro to the story. You have a nice writer's voice. I like the characters. Good job with it.

IBC Root Beer Creator,
R.C. Polk

It's funny to read how magical meets mechanical. I can't wait till you tell how they semi-know each other. Though it probably won't in the next chapter. Anyway, continue soon. (I am reviewing this, BECAUSE I LIKE IT.)

This is an interesting chapter. I don't have much to say, because then I would be repeating my compliments. Also, I can't say continue soon, since there is another chapter. So, I guess I will go read it now.

Good beginning. Again, you have great sentence structure. You seem to have a great ease with writing. Your writing also is very vivid, and makes me feel like I'm there (I know this sounds stupid, but your stories are as good as any book.) Now I’m off to read the chapter.