Wow, that sounds like it was written to me. Ouch.

I try to do something about it, and I have done something about it, but I still feel despair, and I still feel bitter towards the world, as if it is trying to personally make me cry. I don't mean or want to be this way.

*blink, blink* Really, do you have to be good at -everything-?
I usually tend to shy away from poetry, despite my having actually written and posted some, but I saw the summary and I was . . . curious. Intrigued. I don't regret peaking, then reading through. Loved the last two lines especially.

oh, if u wasn't such a cynic i'd agree. lol
you're proberbly sick of me aren't u? tough.
*chains himself to Karasu*;)

Love it.

That is true. Very good poem!

really good--it's super true.. I do that too.. complain and complain and yet I don't do anything to change it.. please write more!