thawas a incredible poem. seemed lamenting about alot of things, maybe hinting at problems with organized religion?

My first words: "Oh good God I love it!"

wow... very rhythmatic. You have to read this aloud or not read it at all.. STRAIGHT TO MY FAVES LIST!

Nice poem. It's hard to keep a rhythm going and say what you want to say, but you pulled it off quite nicely. ^_^ Enjoyable read. -Nchan

i can't review this adicuatley 4 the simple reason that i'm too stunned to be able to think of enough synonyms for absolutley f*ing amazing. sorry. (also, i can't spell. self evident though it may be, but i thought i should mention it because i can usually, it's just that your poem is impeeding brain functions. it's a compliment.:)

I think that u r poem is very well written, and I hope that u will mail me back, and give me u r opinion on a few of the
poems that I have written, thanks
~Sammy~

great!

This is really beautiful, and I truly enjoyed reading it.