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| Victor Soulstorm 2003-11-17 ch 1,  | abusethawas a incredible poem. seemed lamenting about alot of things, maybe hinting at problems with organized religion? |
| Jesi Lynna 2003-11-08 ch 1, | abuseMy first words: "Oh good God I love it!" wow... very rhythmatic. You have to read this aloud or not read it at all.. STRAIGHT TO MY FAVES LIST! |
| Nerilka-chan 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. It's hard to keep a rhythm going and say what you want to say, but you pulled it off quite nicely. ^_^ Enjoyable read. -Nchan |
| Lami 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abusei can't review this adicuatley 4 the simple reason that i'm too stunned to be able to think of enough synonyms for absolutley f*ing amazing. sorry. (also, i can't spell. self evident though it may be, but i thought i should mention it because i can usually, it's just that your poem is impeeding brain functions. it's a compliment.:) |
| Sammy 2002-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that u r poem is very well written, and I hope that u will mail me back, and give me u r opinion on a few of the poems that I have written, thanks ~Sammy~ |
| I C U 2 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abusegreat! |
| Flameboi 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful, and I truly enjoyed reading it. |