Reviews for Shades of Gray Chronicles

Reviews For: Shades of Gray Chronicles - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

lilylupin7 2006-07-13 ch 14,	abuseThis was so sad and sweet...especially with the new beginning. This story reminds me of a poem by O'Shaunessy "For each age is a dream that is dying, or one that is coming to birth"
Shoujo Kitsune 2004-08-23 ch 14,	abuseVery Beautiful. I love the plot, and the descriptions. I think that a couple of things should be added about his other life, and the ending seems a bit confusing. (How did everyone come back to life - What happened to Jonathons "Best Friend" - Why did he go evil in the first place - How was Jonathon connected to both worlds/ other then his invisible friends) Other then some of those loose strings everything was perfect. I hope your not angered by my critical review, I am nowhere near being a great writer. I just feel that if everyone only expresses what is done well, you don't get anywhere as far as improvments go. I always appriciate it when people say what they think about what I write and not worry about how it might make me feel. You are an amazing writer, keep up the good work!
Sh'arra Rie 2004-08-08 ch 14,	abuseI liked this story. It made me smile. Off to read anothere one of your storys. Sh'arra
Ayakaishi Fei 2004-03-27 ch 14,	abuseO.o;; Speechless. ...You are t3h goddess of writing-ness. worships
Chainlinks 2004-02-28 ch 14,	abuseThat was... indescribable? Amazing? I was expecting a great ending, but I wasn't expecting it to be this totally amazing. I mean, I'm crying! What's that say? Totally brilliant. While this has never been my absolute favorite among your stories, this is definitely my favorite conclusion.
Tass 2004-02-28 ch 14,	abuseI would like to just get out of the way the fact that I loved Chehl. Dark or no, he was fun. Insert more fangirlish gushing over Chehl here Moving on . . . Out of the entire thing, I think I enjoyed the last and third to last scenes most. Also, I loved your bits of foreshadowing sprinkled throughout the later parts. The very beginning did not click well with me, but as the story progressed, the story sucked me in. I especially enjoyed the line, "It was an unexpected sunrise". I thought it was well placed and fit right where you put it. As for constructive criticism, there were still some questions to which I would have liked the answers left unexplained and there were a couple typos. In all, though, your writing was, as usual, excellent. Thank you for sharing this lovely story.
Rae1 2004-02-25 ch 14,	abuseIt's over? blink, glazed look It's over. Just like that. Wow. I adore this story, KT, and I love Minoie and killing him was just a "not nice thing" I hope you know. I'd pout but... it's over, and there isn't anything to pout about. Wow? I like it. Interesting twist, the way you ended it, and seeing them all as they end is... just cool. So cool.
Kaze 2004-02-20 ch 13,	abuseI was inspired to go and read this after seeing Surtout Suel's fanart over at DA and I'm glad that I did, I can only hope that you'll update this soon grins It's been a very enjoyable read - you're a good writer
Chainlinks 2004-01-22 ch 13,	abuseThis story always seems to have a melt-y effect on me. I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap this piece up even if I'll be sorry to see Minoie and Jonathon go.
ola 2004-01-21 ch 13,	abusewhat? what do you mean the last chapter!! was this the one before last?!! please write more! so happy you finally decided to update! lol. more more more!! huh, are paul and jon like the dark and light part of that same god? i'm hooked!! fav stories list! yay!
Rae 2004-01-20 ch 13, anon.	abuseWell, better before never than after, I always say. :P You're too cute. And this story. glomps the poor babies If you've hurt Minoie I might just have to hunt you down and feed you... something... distasteful. On a SPORK!
Aphrael 2004-01-20 ch 13,	abuseErk! You were right - that is a MUCH more evil place to leave it at than the last chapter. -_- Poor Minoie... Now I'm going to be wondering about it until you write the next chapter. Evil... shakes head But it's brilliant, of course - I can't deny that. ^_^ I adore your work so much... I can't wait to find out what is up with Paul exactly, and just why Jonathan is needed, and - especially - what's happened to Minoie. bites lip But I'm sure that whatever happens, it'll be worth the wait. :D
ola 2004-01-10 ch 12,	abusewhehe! lol. i love this story. it's so strange and out of the imaginary and... cool. it's great! please, PLEASE keep writing! you haven't updaated in so long! ahh! puppy eyes please, please? you're the best! lol. i like the part about whether it;s okay to keep going, and the double meaning. lol. well done.
Neechi 2003-11-14 ch 12,	abusesniffles KAWAII! ^-^
Chainlinks 2003-07-29 ch 12,	abuseMy computer and FictionPress.net had a disagreement, so you'll have to excuse the late review... proceeds to melt There was definitely angst, but it was all good, pretty, absolutely wonderful angst.

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