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| Beth 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseDreams end. I particularly like this piece for it's metaphores and imagery and it's overall theme. To every trap there is an escape. |
| Meegwun 2002-10-02 ch 1, | abusei'm lost inside this poem, in that there is so much there to explore and interperate. all in all, it's wonderful. |
| An Anonymous Tipster 2002-09-09 ch 1, | abuseHmm... Indeedio... Not a lot of people seem to write original fantasies anymore. Glad to see I'm not the only person in the world with a world in thier head. |
| Pardalis 2002-09-03 ch 1, | abuseIf I attempted for 5 minutes to sum up dreams, life, and 'reality', i couldn't have done it better. |
| nuclear red 2002-08-31 ch 1, | abusewow. just wow. this piece of work is amazing. I can't think of anything else I can say except that your diction and theme in this poem took my breath away. you have a LOT of talent. Keep up the good work! Always be yourself :) -Nuclear Red |
| Rini 2002-08-31 ch 1, | abusebeautiful poem, great imagery, really. I love it, as always. Keep on writing |
| Werecat99 2002-08-30 ch 1, | abuseIt feels sad, but has a beautiful melody in it. I liked it a lot. |