   AriallaZarinth 2003-06-30 . chapter 3/Excellent!/ I love the time line -- the way it goes from mother to daughter. Keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next chap... |
 zoe 2002-12-14 . chapter 3 you finally wrote an original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i am so happy for you. it seems to be going pretty well, but in the 2nd chap., 1st paragraph, you use the word "whipped twice in a row, and it sounds weird. besides that, its good. |
 Anarie 2002-09-13 . chapter 3Great! Great characters, great detail. I got a little confused on the names and titles but hey, that's just me. Keep it up. I'm interested to see where this is going! |
| Katie 2002-09-12 . chapter 3 awesome annie...very good...yu are really drawing the reader into the story...I want you to continue this soon its very good! |
| Katie 2002-09-12 . chapter 3 awesome annie...very good...yu are really drawing the reader into the story...I want you to continue this soon its very good! |
| Katie 2002-09-12 . chapter 3 awesome annie...very good...yu are really drawing the reader into the story...I want you to continue this soon its very good! |
| Kat 2002-09-10 . chapter 3 Please keep up the good work! ^_^ |
| Emily a.k.a Quincer 2002-09-10 . chapter 3 Cool! I love chase scenes. Keep going, Anni! Hehe |
 Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum 2002-09-03 . chapter 2This is a very intriguing story line. I'm very interested to see what happens next! I love the detail in this story, too! |
| Katie 2002-09-03 . chapter 2 great job annie...i love fantasy stories like these...i hope that you continue this soon.... |
 nuckpang 2002-09-01 . chapter 1it's good so far, exelent description, keep it up. |
| Anarie 2002-08-31 . chapter 1 Great piece! You have a talent with words. |
 DarkAngel22 2002-08-31 . chapter 1Great story so far! *thumbs up* Cant wait for more!
You can read my story to if youd like. |
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