I like the poem. You describe a good setting for the title. Good reminisise part. Nice ending to it. THis is a great piece of work that you have written. Write more like these and Im sure you will do very great in poetry.

wow, that was really good

OMG this is a really good pome I love it! Keep up the good work!

Real poetic, I especially like the way you draw it out to the end, ending it with a statement in the name of the poem that sounds final, echoes out past the rest of the poetry.

This one you should NOT cut into verses, though I might have said so for others. It has a sort of a floating quality, like a slow fall. Love's roses that they have shared have all been counted, and the last has fallen down. Good work!

wow. i've never had a loved one die before. i mean some family members, but none that i really knew. i had never even met them. and whenever i tried to ask other family membrs about them they just sort of looked at eachother and wouldn't tell me. i really like your title. it drew my attention right away (who needs food, i live on sap)