I really liked the ending of this chapter :) However, it hasn't been updated in two years... I uh, hope you're updating soon! so close to the end, can't keep us hanging, lol...

"...growled, 'She's not a slave anymore.'"

For some reason, I just really live that ending!

I like the twists and turns :D

If you have time, would u mind letting me know what you think of my story, "This Adventure Called Love..."? :D

Aw, I'm so sad that she died :(

This is a great chapter!

Nice imagery!

Poor girl, would be awful to know your twin migt be killed...

Oh, the plot thickens :D

Hahaha, "animal bedding"... It'll do the prince some good without all his "comfort and convenience" :D

hehe, I'll get to pick up latin in bits! :D I'm trying to insert Mandarin into mine, though not tons.

Oh, very interesting setup. I look forward to reading more! I'd like to know what you think of my story if you have a chance, "This Adventure Called Love...". On to more chapters!

Hah. Weird coincidence, ending up in that town. Then again, there probably aren't that many roads in the area, and not too many towns either. That reduces the probability considerably. Why am I saying this?

ouch. that's gotta hurt. poor former-slave Rebekah. but then again...Daniel shirtless. Er, never mind. *8)

" 'I'm not terribly fond of it myself' ". Heehee.

And Daniel is stomping at a horse. Picturing this really makes me laugh...

More Claetus the divinely inspired. Confirms the confirmation of my suspicions of my musings about Rebekah, getting downright name-specific.