Wow. This is such an interesting idea. The dynamics of the poem are very well done. I especially like the idea of dancing with fear.

Very true...sometimes, we are our own enemy. I like hte way that you kept the lines short at the end. It makes it more powerful that way.

Wow. That was really powerful. I loved it! You made yourself your own worst enemy and while this may be a common topic, you really set a new standard on the subject. Good job!

Amazing write, truly :D

Very nice! I wrote a poem like this with the same idea except you do it -ALOT- better than I do lol. Great work once again!

hear, hear! I totally agree with what you said in the awesome poem!
summerdazed

its a prety good poem. i really liked the idea of it, the message you were conveying. though the poetry was lacking, but thats just me, i don't usually like poems written as this one is. anyways, thanks for reviewing my poem(a song from fear), and feel free to read any of my others.

Powerful ending. It was a little predictable, but satisfying nonetheless. I love those types of stories. Suspense is sometimes bad, often when the surprise is unwanted... which is why predictable is good, it makes it satisfying... I've already stated that, haven't I?

Oh well. o.o;

Great job. :D

I can see I'm not the only one that thinks that, too. xD

-Britt

Speaking as a paranoid person, this is wonderful. No other word. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. So true, so honest, so unique, so gorgeous...so wonderful.

Say You'll Remember

wow, i was kinda confused with that but eventually I got the point. Hey, this is no flame ok? I really like your work. I just love courage! The only problem is... I don't have it. :( Anyway, I know you do, so just keep up the great job! See you around! He he!

Yuki

uh, very dark and emotional! like the ending, it's an interesting turn!

thanks for the nice review :) I'll try and read your essay, sound interesting...

cio,

hoellenwauwau

yea, rock on! That poem rocks, mmyep, whenever I hear footsteps they are my own. fun rush you gave, neh. _

That's so true! The toughest barriers are always those like trust and faith... and yourself once again. Truth... that's all I see in your work... and I luv it! Write more!

Hiya! Wow! You were right! This and my poem really do have similar themes... ;; creepy.

Moving along, this is an awesome poem! Your imagery is great and it's not too short, and not too long... I'm impressed.

Keep writing!

S. Nightingale

Fear can make us or break us. What depth you have put into this piece. Keep writing!