While I prefer cake myself... Was just browsing the poems and came across yours, made me smile. :) (Make a 'series' on different desserts?) Just kidding. Nice work! Kudos.

m...make pudding...invite me...we shall paint the universe chocolate and butterscotch streak of happiness...

lol. way cute. love it!

This is awesome! I love it! *gets teary eyed* But I am afraid I am more of a cheesecake person myself, but chocolate pudding is tied with cheesecake for the most yummy dessert.

That... was... beautiful! *wipes tear from eye* Now. I know writers are concrete on what they submit, ususally, but I would like to give you some constrcutive critiscim (spelling? My spelling sucks!) The smiley face can't really be read aloud, so when reciting this ode aloud, how do you suggest one does the smiley? Is it meant in a comical fashion via facial expression? I would leave it out, personally. It doesn't add much to your ode. If anything, it's just filler, and filler is generall that thing that people use to make an 8 page research paper 14.

LoL! This was great! I mean, gut-busting hilarious!
~tiger~
PS, thanx for your nice review! ;)

Hahaha! That's quite funny! Chocolate pudding, where would I be without you?

*applauds*

That was cute.

I think I hear the ice cream in the freezer calling me, ta-ta.

Haha, great poem. I know exactly how you feel. I especially liked the ending!
~Me