This is good; mostly I like the idea of hiding yourself in time. Very...um...intuitive, That's it.

wish i could do that. just imagine.........

Awesomeness! (and if that wasn't a word before, it is now) Keep up the good work!
Ja ne!
*Dark Angel*

this is creepy.. made me think of a ghost or spirit who's lost.... cool... i like it, write more like it!

Great poem! By the way, thank you for reviewing my story, The Silencer. Now to answer your question, yes, there most likely will be more. If and only if I can think of a good way to continue it. Thanks again! Great job on the poem! Keep it up, and most of all, KEEP WRITING!

-subtle1

Hidden myself in time... Much like a wardering spirit who cannot die nor live. Interesting...

*in awe* Wow. This is so great!