great story now write some more chapters..

purdy cool!

Wah! Tell you what, I really love your work! This is NOT excluded...i repeat, NOT EXCLUDED! Even if you're...um...kinda drunk when YOU wrote this...
Will you continue? I hope so...this is really...REALLY good...well...it's EXTREMELY good! Please continue soon! I meant every word I wrote here...
Peony
PS: I love evil characters...

knock knock? * says sarcastically*
* her muse* Who's there?
Me: Drunk-person
Muse: Drunk-person who?
Me: Drunk-person should update the story so i can read the rest. ^_^
Muse: :P bad joke
ME: * hits muse over head* i'll show you bad joke! * threatens w/ finger* no more muse-sake for a week
Muse: O_o waaaahh? NOOOOOOOOO!!
ME: * smiles* nice story update update update before my muse gets drunk again.

Ooh.

That was good.
That was very good.

Please continue. ;_;

|Meduza|

WOW!! That was really cool how you made their characters sound..though I think that the "curse" is supposed to be about the rape right?..that threw me off, not because he raped her -because obsessers do do that cause they "love" the person so much and all that kinky stuff..;D- N-E-WAYS THIS IS NICE, AND i KNOW THAT THIS WILL HAAUNT HIM IN THE FUTRUE..LIKE i HOPE THAT IT WILL CONTINUE-WITH YOU WRITING IT MAYBE WITH A PARTNER..;);) oops just realized I was writing in caps..:( too bad im not about to erase all that..muahaha okay keep going...I hope that Damien will show his true colors..*sniff**sniff* I know that he isnt that ebil..just a lil obsessive thats all..and uh elena isnt all that innocent or des[erate yall.lol The tailer boy remember..and geez guys with their rape and maybe she will love me minds...lol poor danmien now he is definetly not going to get his woman..lol Maybe I can turn this into a pro Damien story..mind if I help write it or just take your plot and make a story up if u dont wanna continue..well ciao!!

Wow.....that actually....was incredibly good.
I don't know why, but I really liked it.
Why haven't you continued it? I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY THING OR NO MORE SHAMMAYA! (And I even started the next CHAAAPTERRR) *evil cat ears pop up* Ahahahahahaha!
-Spellcaster
(PLZ CONTINUE!)

Wow, this was really good, even if you write it while drunk, i mean i'm really in this story now and i love how you captured damien's evil and ellie's desperate soul. It's a great story and i hope you write more to it (just don't get too drunk hun ;-)

Yay!!! I like it alot, its alot different for your other stories, and its very nicely detailed^_^

the rape part really threw me off. bu keep up the good work.

Holy...

x_x !!!

That just drove me insane for the mere fact that the guy is gonna *probably* (er, most likely) attempt to rape his own kids. o_x And also, I didn't really follow on what he was saying to Elena either (where she kept listening but was all confused and stuff)..probably because I'm on sugar high right now...

BTW, Shiro no Kyuuketsuki....hmm....now I'm not *exactly* sure, but I think the more appropriate way of writing the title is Kyuuketsuki no Shiro (it's reversed). Now I'm not exactly sure, but from I noticed in other anime/manga for example -- Shikon no Tama (Jewel of Four Souls), and more notably Mirai no Trunks (Trunks of the Future)....so...yeah. Reversed. ^_^;;;

The rape part also threw me off my chair LITERALLY (can you just picture that? Especially since I'm on a sugar high). *_* Whee~

Keep up the great work, and have mercy on the children...!

IT's um....it's um...i liked it at first, untill the dudes tartedt o basically RAPE HER! -kills Damein.- MEW WAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!