I loved it. Mushiness notwithstanding. The twist was priceless.

I loved the little twist at the end:)

lily

Great stary Angela! Well put together, vivid descriptions, and a well thought out storyline. 1 typo 9 paragraphs from the bottom-She wanted him to embrace her, and kiss her hair, and assure her that everything was going to be alright! Two girls? Wow thats a really deep story, u have a promising outlook as a future writer. )

WOW! I almost cried... you know me, I don't cry... A GOOD STORY!

nice...please write more stuff!