this sounds like a really good story! please update REALLY soon! or at least as soon as you can!

Sounds interesting ^^. Please update.

Pretty good...want to see more chapters!! ^^ Keep a writing!

Interesting... Sounds like me and my sister... so different from each other... so annoying!

Anyway, great plot idea. Love it. Keep writing. Next Chapter please.

* deos a cartwheel, looks at you stops in front of you, and posts a paper on your forehead wiht tape, the ore reads* UPDATE!!! HEHEHEHEHE UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE
p.s get the message? update!
p.p.s UPDATE!
* stares at you innocently, smiles and cartwheels out of the room*

I love it! FUNKY TOWN!? that was great.. that happens to be just one of the funniest things i have ever read. just that part doing that jon travolta thang. i love it! wait... was it john travolta or tom cruise? anywho. i love it.. keep on writing! ja ne

It's promising!!!!! You gotta hurry up and write more so lil moon moon can read it!!! - begs- pwease?!

Cool! I personally think that it would be better if you wrote in story format. Maybe it's just because I like descriptive stories. But please write this! I think you'll do fine, writing in play format or story format.

Ooooooo! I think it sounds GOOD! Whatever you do keep this story going!

ooooooooooohh.. what a great idea. its hilarious!
theres pros and cons of play and sotry formats.. i like sotyr better cuz its more descriptive.
it should be a humor/romance cuz... thats wat it is, rite? the hole hook-up shonen thing and the pets! what are the pets? i like kitties, they can be very insane.. hahah.. well drop me a line.. or an email cuz i dont have any lines.. i think... O_o

hm..this sounds somewhat like Love Hina =P but better from the sound of your summary! So...I..*drum rolls* ENCOURAGE YOU to write it! This is one hell of a good idea! *starts waving pom poms* Go for it!!

Your story sounds very interesting. please write the next chapter soon.

hehe oooo this sounds like it could be very interesting! I think the plot seems hilarious! ^.^ My choice of story or play would definately be story. I know that plays are fun to write, but sometimes it gets annoying for the reader to read each name all the time and it's not near as descriptive. If you make it into a story type, I will be sure to come back and read it!!!

~PixieMina~ ^.-