Ah yes. The wonderful Abby. Anyhoozles, wonderful story. u.u I like horror. Maybe it's just me, but I think that you should add a second genre under romance. On with the review: Descriptive and well written. Congrats. It's a bit short, but that's okay. Write some more, Sturphanie!

This is really gud,i fink you're a gud writer & u shud definatly rite more stories!

I love this story! Great discriptions and it is well written. You should continue to write other stories and fan fiction. When I read it, I couldn't way to see what had happened to her.