Thought provoking, and doesn't seem as dark as lots of others I have seen. Moreover it seems only to be the writing of the deeper philisophical truths that we (I say 'we' as in the very happy non-balanced people) don't like to recognize or understand. Good job on the wording.

Moon's Tears

... And of course I love this. New word, too, so thankyou much.
Gabby

;.; -.- There there, pain doesn't last for the real forever. By the way, this is suprisingly morbid and depressing. More please.

Deee-veee-aaaaaaaaaaate...lol. good word. I never get tired of ur depressing stuff.

Oh... this is sad, but beautiful. Very painful, but that only makes sense, after all. The repetition was powerful and the rhythm is quite lyrical. Sorry, I'm babbling.

Holy. Fucking. Shit.

I am having trouble breathing. It's that good. You're amazing. *Shakes head* FUCK, this is good...

its very subdued and solemn. poor psyche, all she ever did was love Cupid, but she had to be tricked! she had to see his face with a lantern at night!

its all so sad

kai

I had to read it twice to tally get it, but i really like it. Job well done!