Made me cry! Crap, that was sad.

Oh, God ... this is a profoundly moving story. It's written brilliantly. Sorry I don't review every chapter.
This makes me realise afresh how lucky I am in that I have the prospect of a long life waiting ahead of me. I am free to love.
My exams will end after a week and then I'll read the rest of this story. :)

Excellent! :)

Very much enjoyed. I loved your characters and their story. Just a few typos here and there, but the writing overall was quite good. And you definitely made me tear up a few different times. I enjoyed all the little details, especially their tattoos. Well done. Thanks for posting!

You should label this story as angst...
I cried like shit... It was so saad the ending... But i loved the storyline. Cliched but sweet and cheesy, just how i like it;)

So sad, yet so intriquing! I'll have to copy and paste this on a word document and read it later!

Oh my gosh I cry and cry I knew I would but I wanted to read it anyways why couldn't you write an alternative ending where she has some kind of miracle sergury now I must cry my self to sleep. Great sad story.:)

This is so sad!:(
I really enjoyed reading it.
Great Story!

Aww... Such an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading! The end was so sad, I wanted Charlie and Shawn to be together forever, but I guess I was expecting her to die. Amazing!
Megan :)

that was beautiful

I can't believe this story got to me. It made me tear up bad (though my stubborn tough side claims i am merely tearing due to tiredness and strained eyes) but still. So incredibly sad. Beautiful (T_T)

I love it honestly :'(

Keep it real.

-iCY-

This story has numerous grammatical errors and such. The subconflicts (such as the one with both Shia and Que) weren't very well resolved. Some characters weren't that developed but as a reader, you forget all that. Because the essence of the story is complete. This story was more than just a girl looking for fulfillment in her last months. This was about a girl realizing and giving others realizations. Charlie isn't 'just another girl.'

The thought is beautiful but I suggest editing it a bit to make it more realistic. The relationship of Shawn and Charlie as kids wasn't that clearly stated and Winston needed a bit more detail. But even so, I loved it.

Thank you for sharing this story with us.

A tear-jerking conclusion to an inspirational story. That's all.

you made me cry really. your story is just, it made me cry.

This was a very n extremely emotional chapter! I was Shawn through it.

Great story. Please keep on being great...its the reason u have such an amazing talent!