|Reviews for Just Another Girl|
| Kirihime 5/16/13 . chapter 32
Made me cry! Crap, that was sad.
| AmorConquersAll 1/5/13 . chapter 8
Oh, God ... this is a profoundly moving story. It's written brilliantly. Sorry I don't review every chapter.
This makes me realise afresh how lucky I am in that I have the prospect of a long life waiting ahead of me. I am free to love.
My exams will end after a week and then I'll read the rest of this story. :)
| Guest 1/5/13 . chapter 8
| R. Ficst 12/22/12 . chapter 32
Very much enjoyed. I loved your characters and their story. Just a few typos here and there, but the writing overall was quite good. And you definitely made me tear up a few different times. I enjoyed all the little details, especially their tattoos. Well done. Thanks for posting!
| F.H.W 10/25/12 . chapter 32
You should label this story as angst...
I cried like shit... It was so saad the ending... But i loved the storyline. Cliched but sweet and cheesy, just how i like it;)
| humanwriter13 10/9/12 . chapter 1
So sad, yet so intriquing! I'll have to copy and paste this on a word document and read it later!
| AnonymousReads 9/28/12 . chapter 32
Oh my gosh I cry and cry I knew I would but I wanted to read it anyways why couldn't you write an alternative ending where she has some kind of miracle sergury now I must cry my self to sleep. Great sad story.:)
| Angelbaby1991 8/21/12 . chapter 32
This is so sad!:(
I really enjoyed reading it.
| MEG0205 8/10/12 . chapter 32
Aww... Such an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading! The end was so sad, I wanted Charlie and Shawn to be together forever, but I guess I was expecting her to die. Amazing!
| loonly person 6/22/12 . chapter 32
that was beautiful
| iCY the Polar Kid 5/18/12 . chapter 32
I can't believe this story got to me. It made me tear up bad (though my stubborn tough side claims i am merely tearing due to tiredness and strained eyes) but still. So incredibly sad. Beautiful (T_T)
I love it honestly :'(
Keep it real.
| Sapphyre Nymph 4/20/12 . chapter 32
This story has numerous grammatical errors and such. The subconflicts (such as the one with both Shia and Que) weren't very well resolved. Some characters weren't that developed but as a reader, you forget all that. Because the essence of the story is complete. This story was more than just a girl looking for fulfillment in her last months. This was about a girl realizing and giving others realizations. Charlie isn't 'just another girl.'
The thought is beautiful but I suggest editing it a bit to make it more realistic. The relationship of Shawn and Charlie as kids wasn't that clearly stated and Winston needed a bit more detail. But even so, I loved it.
Thank you for sharing this story with us.
| Cassie 4/1/12 . chapter 32
A tear-jerking conclusion to an inspirational story. That's all.
| sarah begum 3/14/12 . chapter 32
you made me cry really. your story is just, it made me cry.
| I'm made for sin 2/18/12 . chapter 32
This was a very n extremely emotional chapter! I was Shawn through it.
Great story. Please keep on being great...its the reason u have such an amazing talent!