oh, god i want to cry. this story is so depressing. thinking of not just Charlie but of everyone that loves her. losing someone you love...i can't even imaging it.

poor Shawn... i feel for him, Winston and Charlie. this is my second time reading this story and i just can't stand knowing that everything is going to end in sadness.

I really really love you story. Every time I read it I always end up crying :)

omg! your story is really really nice! :D

beautiful story

So far this start is really drawing me in! But just wanted to comment that she must live in a really tall town if she is "surrounded by girls" who are 5'8" and 5'9", and that 5'4" is short! : )

this story is aMazing! it touched me in so many ways i couldnt stop crying

This story is so sad. I love it.

you're an incredible writer, every emotion you portrayed i felt. I even want as far as crying sometimes. I think you're amazing. ;D

OMG! im still crying.. this is the firt story in fictionpress that made me cry.. this story ROCKS! i love it love it love it... ! i even cry on the chapter where Charlie told Quentin about her sickness.. OMG! you so ROCK CheDe!

this is a really awesome story..

good job! i hope that you keep it up!

lol..

xbeax

This story was really sweet,and once I started reading it I could not stop!This story has a lot of emotion and made me cry a lot.(I bet my eyes are )But does Shawn ever get to see Charlie in the afterlife?Or in a another life?(I believe in that kind of stuff.)In the end,great story,wonderful plot and sad,but heartwarming bittersweet ending.

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It was good. :)

Though i must admit, I prefer Quentin to Shawn. Her ending up with Shawn is kind of like weird, cause i always envisioned them as siblings. But i'm biased, and i pretty much abhor childhood friendships turned romance.

I had a feeling they'd end up ever since chapter 9 that they'd end up together, but i read on in hopes of her falling in love with Quentin.

So it was kind of awkward towards the end, for me.

It was good overall though.

This story is so awesome. I wasn't excepting it to be this good(No offense). usually when i read stories on this site and there is alot of dialogue and few descriptions i skip it but this story was wow. How did you manage to create so much emotions. I cried at the end 10 stars.. Keep up the good work

Man, i love your story so much. It's full of emotions that it made me cry. Which is a good thing since i don't cry that easily... i first thought that she'll end up with quentin but i was wrong. your story has a lot of twists that it mde it unpredictable which is by the way is really awesome! touching story. you really did a great job!:D

Touching story. Great job.