this is great. i'm so adding this to my favorites list

~The Cat Eyed Gypsy

Oh wow, I love this. Its quite deep, and yeah, i love it.

This one flows very well. I just love your work so much

I love it! It's...I don't know. I just love it.
~Angel Karora

Ooh. This poem was beyond excellent in my opinion. I loved the rhyming scheme, it worked so well, and the emotions of hate/pain came through greatly. Excellent!

yes, sweet poem, o, but check it- if you wanted it like
"Cold metal,
burning skin,
Is nothing..."
with the next phrase on the next line, then by ff.net it is wrong(methinks ff.net has like everything on double space, so...yea, but kewl poem

I like the poem, sounds sorta like a song. And you're rite. Life isn't what it seems. Keep up the good work.

Luff Lani