I admired the subject you chose to write on, and like you said in your summary, I did understand and to an extent relate to it. However, I wouldn't be a good reviewer if I did not point out that you use a comma and then a capital in nearly every line in this poem - and that kinda annoys me! I would suggest you replaced the commas with periods, which would give the poem even more of an abrupt feel and maybe even render it better! This is just my intrusive opinion, however!

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]

Someones suicidal.

I love the choppy-ness [damn, is that even a word...?] of the poem. The way it flows [or... doesn't?]. It makes it interesting.

I gotta say...you rule.

Wow, this is angsty.
Yeah, death will always be with us, no matter what we do. It's funny how we can actually manage to 'kill' someone, including ourselves, without even laying a finger upon them.
*Sigh*
Death is a lot of stuff really.
Oh well.

Has a very dark and depressing feel to it, Excellent Job! If you find the time please do check out my poem 'Spontaneous Combustion' Thanks!

Thats really good keep it up