i really liked this poem and the way you scattered the lines kind of suggested an importance of sorts. it was very catching and i really enjoyed reading it. i thought that it was very well written.
-jessie

I think this is brilliant, beautiful even! Well done!
Luv katie x

Again, great!

This is absolutely fantastic, it really is!
Has great rythm, which is fantastic in a poem, and i just think it is really orignal. I love this!!

Haven't read anything quite like that before, it was cool!