   Lunar Wulf Gemini 2004-02-15 . chapter 1This is really good... and really interesting... I'll read more and review again later. |
 the red krayon 2004-02-04 . chapter 7o o o o o o . . . .
CHIHAYA! HE SOUNDS REALLY COOL! WAHAHAHAHAHA!
*stares at kazure and seikei*
wh-whoa... |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 6 *blinks* wow! she trusts him a lot so quickly! haha! |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 5 wait a sec... are you the same spellcastre from ff.net? cuz if you are, you might know me..haha.. DarkLark00 dats me...
anywho, wow! Saurieon ish a really cool dude too! at first i thought she was just a minor character, but i think thats not true... good job! |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 4 O.O wow!
she changes! yay!
i like it!! yesh yesh! |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 3 aw... *sniffle*
people die too much... sigh...
that was a great chapter too! |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 2 hehe...nice!
it seems like kazure is going to change... ^^ |
| the red krayon 2004-01-08 . chapter 1 Whoa... whoa...
that was awesome!
ooh... *shivers with excitment*
can't wait to find out what happens next! |
 Fuu Hououji1 2003-11-10 . chapter 8I find it a little bit odd that in your earlier chapters you were so . . . um . . . distressed (?) about your story and if people were reading it. I think that the plot and characters are wonderful, and you descriptions are remarkably vivid. You're a wonderful up-and-coming author. My one suggestion for your story is the development of the plot. Everything seems to happen so quickly, without pause in between. I want you to know that you're wonderful, your story is wonderful, you're doing a great job, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
-FuuHououji |
 Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 8Nice going, nice!
But I think Kazure should have 'Black Angel' as a hero. Seikei, even if he's sweet, is kinda feeble.
Yeah, Chihaya is so col. Cool since he was 12 till 8 yrs later. Please read my War of Rigel chapter 1! And guess who the main characters are! |
| Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 7 Hey cool! her heart softened by a not-so-warrior-boy!
All of a sudden 'Aishiteru' came out. Boys and girls are dostined to be together, no? ^_^ |
| Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 6 Dunno what to say. Suddenly she told Seikei her real name. Already worthy enough. Oh, I like the way they remember about their pasts. Try reading my fic 'War of Rigel'. |
| Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 4 Unpredictable.
Never thought that Seikei would be related to Kazuhiko. |
| Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 3 WONDERFULLY SPOKEN!
"What am I to do, fair warrior? One of the forests who knows so much more than I!"
I absolutely like that! |
| Vulpine Ninja 2003-07-05 . chapter 2 There's a little Rurouni Kenshin here. But, it's cool! I like how her personalities change. |
FictionPress.com - let the words flow