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BaBeE FaYs 2002-11-22 . chapter 1
HeYs ^^ niceeeee....its so many thingz u can relate too! and its so deep and meaning ful! keep it up sj! u haf a real talent!
calsita 2002-10-21 . chapter 1
You're really good at this...and now I feel depressed again. Oh well, I did anyway. Not sleeping depresses me.
Narelle 2002-09-09 . chapter 1
I'm on a reviewing binge... Haha. This is truly beautiful... really. If there's anything you have to be proud of yourself for, it's that you can write beautiful poems like this.
Narvis 2002-09-09 . chapter 1
Amazing! You are a talent. I wish sometimes at I can whrite just like you, I´m a little jaloux on you but it´s okay, look, I need some friends here, can you help me please?
Elisabeth 2002-09-08 . chapter 1
oh i think this poem was soooo good and I can deffinatly relate. You keep ut the good work you hear me!!

Love Elisabeth
lyre in the stars 2002-09-08 . chapter 1
good job, darling. this poem screams angst at at me. it's bitter darkdeath bloodstained hardwood floors where tortured feet walk upon.
SweetGrape 2002-09-08 . chapter 1
Very strong and angry start, bitter.
Stays that way except for the 'embrace the darkness- it's the only that cares' part being very sad and lonely.

(should be a higher rating, btw)
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