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Reviews For: Tears of Fire
arwen-evenstar89 2004-08-13 . chapter 2
Yes I did like it! You had nice descriptions and I liked the idea of the necklaces being on something other than a boring silver chain! Great job!
~Lauren
Pont 2003-09-14 . chapter 2
AGH! *beats cliffhanger over the head with a pan* O-O oh, hi.

well anywho, awesome story! i really loved the change of events from the prologue thingie to the first chapter. FUN! can't wait to find out what these powers are!

*you review for me i review for you*

ps- the redundancy is getting better, but it's a little bit in this one too. i can't remember where, but it's there sorry!
K. Francesco 2002-10-15 . chapter 2
hm...interesting I'm still waiting to see where this is headed, but i did enjoy what u have now! Can't wait to see them start using their powers
Kat
Dark Sephiroth 2002-09-20 . chapter 2
wow.
Rei Kaseino 2002-09-09 . chapter 1
Sounds really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens! ^.^
K. Francesco 2002-09-08 . chapter 1
agh!!! no!!! suspense!!! it seems like it can develop into a good story...maybe with some fantasy too...
write some more soon, please
Kat
Scarlet Cross x 2002-09-08 . chapter 1
This ish really good. You're right, a little on the short side, but oh well, it keeps the readers wanting more. BWHAHAHAHAHA. I'm adding this to mah favorites list. I'm really interested in it.
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