There really is some great writing here, I really like it a lot. If you crave feedback put some of it on Deviantart if you haven't already, you're bound to get some, your poems being as they are.

ok. i'm not going to flame you becuase i'm not a one minded guy. i like it, it touched me, in a way i can't really describe. but besides that, were you the one who sent about two more flames under different names?